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说起中考英语书面表达,很多同学就犯愁。明明单词背了不少,语法也学了七七八八,可一到写作文就不知道该怎么下笔。其实啊,书面表达拉开差距的关键,往往就在于那些"亮眼"的句型。用对了句型,分数自然就上去了。今天咱们就来聊聊,在初三英语一对一辅导过程中,老师们最常强调的那些亮点句型到底该怎么用。
我在金博教育带过不少初三学生,发现一个共同的问题:大家写作文的时候,句式太单调了。全篇都是简单句堆砌,读起来就像白开水,淡而无味。阅卷老师每天要看那么多作文,凭什么给你的高分?所以啊,学会用一些有层次、有亮点的句型,真的太重要了。
先说说阅卷老师的心理。你想啊,同一个题目,几万个学生写,阅卷老师看到的作文大同小异。这时候,如果突然冒出一句特别地道的表达、特别有逻辑的句子,老师的精神头立马就来了。这就好比在一盘青菜里突然吃到一块肉,印象分自然就上去了。
从评分标准来看,中考英语书面表达一般从四个方面打分:内容要点、语言准确度、句式多样性和连贯性。前两点是基础,后两点才是拉开差距的关键。句式多样性怎么体现?就是靠那些亮点句型啊。
举个简单的例子。同样表达"因为下雨,我们取消了户外活动",普通学生可能会写:
Because it rained, we cancelled the outdoor activity.
这句子对不对?对。简单不简单?太简单了。换一种方式:

The outdoor activity had to be called off due to the sudden heavy rain.
或者用上强调句:
It was the heavy rain that forced us to cancel the outdoor activity.
你看,同样一个意思,换个说法是不是高级多了?这就是亮点句型的魅力所在。
作文开头太重要了。开头开得好,后面的内容老师才愿意继续看。下面这些句型,特别适合用在各种题材的文章开头。
With the development of... 随着……的发展
这是最经典的开头句型,几乎适用于所有议论文和说明文。比如:

With the development of modern technology, people's lives have changed a lot.
这句话可以用来引出科技对生活的影响、环保问题、教育变革等各种话题。建议初三学生把这个句型练熟,绝对是百搭款。
Recently, ...has become a hot topic.
Recently近年来,……成为了热门话题。这个句型适合引出社会现象类的话题。比如:
Recently, the problem of environmental protection has become a hot topic in our daily life.
It is generally believed that... 人们普遍认为……
这个句型适合引出观点类的开头,显得比较客观正式。比如:
It is generally believed that reading is very important for teenagers.
很多同学写作文,段落之间、各句子之间缺乏过渡,读起来很生硬。以下这些衔接句型能让你的文章更有逻辑性、更有"整体感"。
Not only... but also... 不仅……而且……
这是增强句子层次感的利器。比如:
Reading not only enlarges our knowledge but also broadens our horizons.
Taking exercise regularly can not only make us stronger but also help us relieve stress.
使用这个句型的时候要注意,Not only放在句首时,后面要接倒装结构。比如:
Not only does reading enrich our mind, but it also brings us great pleasure.
Although/Though... 尽管……
表示让步关系的句型,让你的论述更加辩证全面。比如:
Although the task was difficult, they managed to finish it on time.
Though she is young, she is very independent.
What's more/Moreover/Besides 此外/而且
这三个词都是表示递进关系的小词,用在句子开头或者中间,效果很好。相比之下,What's more更口语化,Moreover和Besides更书面化。
However/Nevertheless 然而/但是
表示转折关系,是作文中不可或缺的语气转折词。比如:
Many people think that money is the most important thing in life. However, I believe that health is more valuable than wealth.
Therefore/Thus/As a result 因此/所以
表示因果关系或者结果,适合用在分析问题、得出结论的地方。比如:
He didn't study hard. As a result, he failed the exam.
We should protect the environment. Therefore, we must take action now.
下面这些句型属于"高级货",用好了能让你的作文瞬间提升一个档次。但要注意,用之前一定要确保语法正确,不然反而会扣分。
It is + adj. + for sb. to do sth. 做某事对某人来说……
这是写作中使用频率最高的句型之一,特别适合表达观点。比如:
It is very important for us to learn English well in today's world.
It is necessary for students to develop good reading habits.
It is said/reported/believed that... 据说/据报道/人们认为……
这个句型适合引用数据或者普遍认知,增加作文的可信度。比如:
It is said that about 30% of the students in our country are nearsighted.
It is reported that the weather will be very hot next week.
The reason why... is that... ……的原因是……
这个句型用来解释原因,比"Because..."更有结构感。比如:
The reason why I want to be a teacher is that I love working with children.
The reason why many people like living in the city is that there are more job opportunities there.
强调句:It is/was + 被强调部分 + that/who + 其他
强调句是中考英语的热门考点,用好了非常加分。什么内容都可以强调:
It is parents who love us most in the world.
It was because of his carelessness that he made such a mistake.
It is through hard work that we can achieve our dreams.
倒装句:Only in this way can we... / Not until... did...
倒装句用得恰当会非常出彩,但难度较大,建议在熟练掌握的情况下使用。
Only by working hard can we succeed in the future.
Not until I grow up do I realize how much my parents have done for me.
Here comes the chance you have been waiting for!
作文的结尾也很重要,好的结尾能让文章锦上添花,给人留下深刻印象。
In short/In conclusion 总之/总的来说
这是最常用的结尾过渡词,引出全文总结。比如:
In short, English learning requires both hard work and proper methods.
Hopefully/I sincerely hope... 希望……
表达祝愿或者期望,适合用在建议类、号召类的文章结尾。比如:
I sincerely hope that everyone can contribute to protecting our environment.
Hopefully, we can all become responsible citizens of society.
Let's do sth. together 让我们一起……
用于号召类文章的结尾,增强感染力。比如:
Let's take action now and make our world a better place!
Let's work together to create a greener future!
知道了这么多句型,具体该怎么组合使用呢?下面我按照中考常见的作文题材,给大家一些搭配建议。
| 作文题材 | 推荐开头句型 | 推荐衔接句型 | 推荐结尾句型 |
| 议论观点类 | It is generally believed that... / Recently... has become a hot topic | Not only... but also... / Although... / However... | In short... / I sincerely hope... |
| 说明介绍类 | With the development of... / It is known that... | First of all... / Besides... / What's more... | Hopefully... / I believe... |
| 建议信/倡议类 | I'm writing to... / It is my honor to... | First... Second... / In addition... / Moreover... | Let's... together / I believe that... |
| 记叙经历类 | I'll never forget the day when... / It was the first time that... | At that time... / Suddenly... / To my surprise... | From this experience, I learned that... / This event taught me... |
这个表格建议大家保存起来,写作文的时候对照参考。时间久了,这些句型就会自然而然地用上。
句型虽好,但也不能滥用。有几个坑,大家一定要避开。
第一,不要为了用句型而用句型。有些同学背了几个高级句型,写作文的时候生搬硬套,结果导致上下文不连贯,逻辑混乱。句型是为内容服务的,不是用来显摆的。如果一个简单句就能表达清楚的意思,就没必要强行用复杂句型。
第二,确保语法正确再用。亮点句型一旦用错,反而会成为扣分点。比如强调句,如果成分没写对,就会被扣分。与其冒险用错,不如用对的简单句。所以,在考场上,如果没有把握,宁可用简单句,也别出错。
第三,注意句型的多样性。一篇作文用一两个亮点句型就够了,全篇都是复杂句型,读起来会很累,而且不真实。好的作文应该是简单句和复杂句搭配使用,错落有致。
第四,要结合具体语境。同一个句型在不同语境下效果完全不同。比如It is said that...这个句型,引用数据的时候很合适,但如果是你自己的观点,就不太合适了。用之前想一想,这个句型放在这里是否恰当。
知道了哪些句型好用,接下来就是怎么把它们变成自己的东西。在金博教育的一对一辅导中,我们会让学生做好以下几件事。
学习句型这件事,急不得。今天背五个,明天背五个,日积月累,慢慢就丰富起来了。关键是坚持,每周固定一个时间复习一下之前学过的句型,不然很容易遗忘。
说了这么多,其实核心思想就一个:写作文要有"包装意识"。内容是基础,句型是包装。好的包装能让你的内容更容易被认可。句型不是花架子,是实实在在的得分点。
不过呢,句型只是工具,真正的实力还是来自平时的积累。单词要背,语法要懂,阅读要坚持。句型是帮你把已有知识更好地表达出来的"技巧",而不是替代品。希望大家既能掌握这些亮点句型,也能打好基础,两手都要抓,两手都要硬。
中考英语说难不难,说容易也不容易。关键是找对方法,用对劲。祝愿每一个正在努力的同学,都能取得自己满意的成绩。加油!

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